Writing Prompt

Wrote a short story yesterday as well. Did some editing on it today, it feels awkward to me, but I think a lot of it is because it's written in second person and I'm not used to it, it's also not my preferred reading style, but I felt it worked best with the prompt. (I suppose I could've done first person, but I'm worse at that than I am second person lol)

The Prompt:
You're being chased by a vampire through the city, one hour before sunrise. You see a homeless person's tent and dive in. You now have to convince the bewildered person inside, for one hour, to ignore the gorgeous, seductive vampire on the other side of the flaps trying to gain an invitation.

( My Story )

I'm not sure it's exactly what the prompt was looking for, but that's what came out lol. Any comments or concrit are welcome!